Admin
Administrator 
brect[M:-2154]
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Post by Admin on Apr 6, 2012 23:15:31 GMT -5
I subtracted the marks for both and added the character space, but you want FFFFFF for white, I expect? |
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Birdy
Wingrider 
birdct[M:50]
Posts: 22
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Post by Birdy on Apr 7, 2012 4:41:07 GMT -5
Yeah, silly me. Sorry C:
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Chek
Weyrlingmaster 
chekct[M:-15]
I'm so magical I vomit rainbows
Posts: 1,091
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Post by Chek on Apr 8, 2012 1:46:29 GMT -5
Character: Day'ar (Cathaline)
Pet's Name: Cecy
Pet's Species: Canine
Pet's Hex: 1a1b1f and FFFFFF
Pet's Color: Black and White
Character: Sebolaren (Ruin)
Pet's Name: Cojak
Pet's Species: Canine
Pet's Hex: 777C92
Pet's Color: Grey
Character: Rennin
Pet's Name: Timor
Pet's Species: Canine
Pet's Hex: 474955 and FFFFFF
Pet's Color: Gray and White
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Post by larkwing on Apr 8, 2012 4:07:55 GMT -5
Character: Abetzi
Pet's Name: River
Pet's Species: Runnerbeast
Pet's Hex: 5f5f5f
Pet's Color: Gray Roan
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kireon
Candidatemaster
kirct[M:-191]
Posts: 739
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Post by kireon on Apr 15, 2012 17:35:21 GMT -5
Character: H'lios
Pet's Name: Flicker
Pet's Species: Firelizard
Pet's Hex: F6CCDA
Pet's Color: Pink!
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Admin
Administrator
brect[M:-2154]
Posts: 3,754
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Post by Admin on Apr 15, 2012 22:31:23 GMT -5
Everything done up to here! |
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Post by matsi on Apr 16, 2012 16:07:28 GMT -5
Character: Imagnis (WIP)
Pet's Name: Hawk
Pet's Species: Firelizard
Pet's Hex: Base (ff005b) with Markings (ffc4af). Her lighter pink covers her muzzle, her all of her tail, and her hind feet.
Pet's Color: Pink
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Admin
Administrator
brect[M:-2154]
Posts: 3,754
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Post by Admin on Apr 16, 2012 17:01:18 GMT -5
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Gray
Wingrider
grayct[M:-350]
Posts: 870
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Post by Gray on Apr 17, 2012 19:51:14 GMT -5
Character: Lyr Pet's Name: Lace Pet's Species: Firelizard Pet's Hex: 64b54a Pet's Color: Green, with Luna Moth influences.  Satin's Bargained Skolbaby XD
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Admin
Administrator
brect[M:-2154]
Posts: 3,754
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Post by Admin on Apr 17, 2012 22:24:05 GMT -5
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Zane
Drudge
zanect[M:0]
They see me rollin', they hatin'.~
Posts: 40
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Post by Zane on May 31, 2012 12:07:01 GMT -5
Board/Thread: Dragon Colors.
Quoted Error: “However they also have the intelligence and ingenuity to function as ringleaders when necessary.”
Problem: Under purple sub-kings. Wingleaders as opposed to ringleaders.
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Cathaline
Lady Holder
cathct[M:50]
Posts: 3,279
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Post by Cathaline on May 31, 2012 12:25:55 GMT -5
Marks added.
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Lan
Weyrlingmaster
lanct[M:-1025]
Nomming ALL the kidpets!
Posts: 1,266 
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Post by Lan on Jun 9, 2012 20:28:46 GMT -5
I, LAN, wish to have an extra character space.
Because LOSK. <3 |
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Cathaline
Lady Holder
cathct[M:50]
Posts: 3,279
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Post by Cathaline on Jun 9, 2012 20:33:26 GMT -5
Marks subtracted. Character space added!
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Post by taylor on Jun 22, 2012 17:50:22 GMT -5
Board: Map of Dalibor
Text under wher housing map says they are in west wall, rather than east.
Board/Thread: Dragon descriptions (http://daliborweyr.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=dragons&action=display&thread=8206)
In the red's description, it says "reaching physically maturity" - it should be physical maturity.
In the viridian's description, it says "not known being reasonable" - it's missing the "for" that belongs in that phrase.
A little later in that description, it says "Unlike their namesake, viridians tend to be vibrant or sickly shades of green than bluish." I'm assuming there's meant to be a "more" before vibrant or something like that? Otherwise "than" doesn't really sound right.
In the cyan's description it says "However, as a whole, they be very purposeful." Looks like it's missing a "can" or "tend to be" or some such.
And later in the cyan's description, it does the "reaching physically maturity" thing again.
Board: History of Dalibor (http://daliborweyr.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=rulebook&action=display&thread=8204)
In the history of Dalibor, second paragraph, "Her name was Teth and she Impressed Circe, a healer whisked away from For when she was searched." Was that supposed to be "Fort"?
The last sentence in the fourth paragraph is "The mutation had arrived and were here to stay." You're lacking subject-verb agreement. Should either be mutations or was.
The end of the fifth paragraph is missing a period: "With this ragtag bunch and a small set of crafters and support staff, they moved into the extinct volcanic island in Crescent Bay Several more riders, including the young Fajra of copper Kalith, joined them during the unnamed Weyr's construction, but the group remained small during its first turns of life, the other Weyrs reluctant to volunteer personnel."
The seventh paragraph has a typo (an extra semi-colon.) "All seemed well;; the clutch was large and healthy, including a glistening Queen egg."
The second to last paragraph before events start having dates has a typo in Impressing: "Those candidates included Duilios, the Lord Holder who became D'lios after Impressign brown Perbiath."
(I can change the format of all of that if you want, but I was writing it in a notepad as I went, before I saw this, and it seems like it still has all the info?)
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Alec
Wingrider
alecct[M:-360]
Cuteness abound!
Posts: 544
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Post by Alec on Jun 22, 2012 23:29:51 GMT -5
Amount Donating: 30
Recipient's Name: Dantris
Recipient's Username: silence
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Boo
Jr. Weyrwoman
booct[M:-425]
Shirath: THOSE aren't spirit fingers... THESE ARE SPIRIT FINGERS!!!
Posts: 1,917
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Post by Boo on Jun 26, 2012 19:02:35 GMT -5
Character: O'wen Pet's Name: "Oh, annnnd, he's called 'Sir Bombington III'. The 'b' is *not* silent." Pet's Species: Firelizard Pet's Hex: 642667Pet's Color: Purple As won from the trivia and gifted to Frangipani Also! Amount Donating: 20 Recipient's Name: Taylor Recipient's Username: taylor
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Cathaline
Lady Holder
cathct[M:50]
Posts: 3,279
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Post by Cathaline on Jul 3, 2012 22:42:33 GMT -5
Marks added to Taylor for catching errors; marks transferred; pet on record!
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Lan
Weyrlingmaster
lanct[M:-1025]
Nomming ALL the kidpets!
Posts: 1,266
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Post by Lan on Jul 14, 2012 1:32:36 GMT -5
Character: Lillis
Pet's Name: Brain
Pet's Species: Feline
Pet's Hex: #000000, #ffffff
Pet's Color: White & Black
Character: Stresakorth (Lillis)
Pet's Name: Pinky
Pet's Species: Feline
Pet's Hex: #b8a37a, #ffffff, #000000
Pet's Color: Callico
They will be found sometime in the near future... Because win.
EDIT: Also:
I, LAN, wish to have an extra character space.
DOUBLE EDIT:
I, LAN, wish to have an extra character space... again... which Cath is paying for because she LOVES me. =D |
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Cathaline
Lady Holder
cathct[M:50]
Posts: 3,279
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Post by Cathaline on Jul 21, 2012 0:37:11 GMT -5
Marks taken, character spaces on record, pets on record!
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Ondine
Jr. Weyrleader
ondct[M:-155]
Posts: 436
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Post by Ondine on Jul 31, 2012 23:55:55 GMT -5
200 MARKS FOR ANOTHER CHARACTER SLOT! WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRSSSSSSSSSS.
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Cathaline
Lady Holder
cathct[M:50]
Posts: 3,279
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Post by Cathaline on Aug 1, 2012 0:26:48 GMT -5
Marks taken, slot added!
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kireon
Candidatemaster
kirct[M:-191]
Posts: 739
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Post by kireon on Aug 3, 2012 18:21:57 GMT -5
I, KIREON, WOULD LIKE ANOTHER CHARACTER SPACE! 8D
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Cathaline
Lady Holder
cathct[M:50]
Posts: 3,279
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Post by Cathaline on Aug 3, 2012 18:26:00 GMT -5
Marks taken, space added!
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Boo
Jr. Weyrwoman
booct[M:-425]
Shirath: THOSE aren't spirit fingers... THESE ARE SPIRIT FINGERS!!!
Posts: 1,917
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Post by Boo on Aug 9, 2012 21:08:13 GMT -5
Character: Naanell Pet's Name: Teeny Pet's Species: Feline Pet's Hex: Gray #BAB5B2Pet's Color: Black face, tail and paws, smoky gray body.
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