Adoption List Tweaks by Azh and Cath
Why does the list need tweaking?Currently the list has 50+ characters on it, many with unupdated profiles. People can be deterred by having too many choices and by having incomplete information about characters (ex. neither Animatora/White Zuccheroth's current blurb nor their complete profile indicate that Zuccheroth is blind and highly empathic).
How should the list be tweaked?First, we would like to cut down on the sheer number of adoptable characters. Most fighter characters, for example, are unneeded as people can freely create their own fighters with whatever personalities they like. Wherhandlers are not being addressed at this time, but our list covers everything else.
Second, we propose a new method of organizing adoptables' blurbs and a new presentation of their profiles that gives potential players more information and fewer restrictions.
Character-by-Character Remove/Keep Tweaks (47)NOTE: For the purposes of this suggestion, "backstory" refers to IC interactions rather than the material in the History section of a profile.
- [REMOVE] L'ven / Bronze Valleth
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- Backstory with absent characters, already skipped town once to go take care of relatives.
[/li][li] [KEEP] C'tan / Iron Majeth (Wingsecond)[/b][/color]
- Put up for adoption on the request of the player, generally unconnected to anyone, older kingrider that would be decent for just about anyone to jump in with.
[/li][li] [REMOVE] Durian / Brown Mesreath (Wingsecond, female Brownrider)[/b][/color]
- Hoarding a special Impression. No dragon personality or development post-Hatching in profile (making it harder for an interested player to app for her, and not in a good way). Not attached to many current players' characters. Some interest (reservations) were previously shown for her, but no one has followed through and it would be better to have a specially Impressed character that's connected to Dali's current players.
[/li][li] [KEEP] Calmera / Orange Minanth[/b][/color]
- Cath said I'm not allowed to touch. : (
[/li][li] [KEEP] B'lor / Viridian Neth[/b][/color]
- Reserved.
[/li][li] [REMOVE] C'fael / Brown Ansyth[/b][/color]
- Extensive backstory with an absent character.
[/li][li] [KEEP] M'tren / Brown Esprith[/b][/color]
- Knight plays his brother A'tra. NOTE: has no dragon information or post-Hatching development in profile. If Knight doesn't care about maintaining a relationship then he would probably be [REMOVE] instead.
[/li][li] [KEEP] N'tiel / Brown Pionith[/b][/color]
- Well-developed profile and not bogged down in backstory.
[/li][li] [KEEP] Animatora / White Zucherroth (Bronze firelizard)[/b][/color]
- Interesting dragon, though his info as well as post-Hatching developments are missing from the profile. Sister to A'mor.
[/li][li] [REMOVE] A'dan / Blue Territh[/b][/color]
- Has backstory with currently absent character, to the point where his flit is named after said character. No dragon information or post-Hatching information in profile.
[/li][li] [KEEP] B'nyur / Blue Oveth (Journeyman Dragonhealer, Copper firelizard)[/b][/color]
- Journeyman Dragonhealer with goodies. Old. People are no longer req'd to talk with Show to adopt her characters so they may be more encouraged to pick him up if properly presented.
[/li][li] [REMOVE] C'dog / Blue Erosepoth[/b][/color]
- No dragon info or post-Hatching development in profile.
[/li][li] [REMOVE] Tahoi / Blue Tornath[/b][/color]
- People can make their own blueriders.
[/li][li] [REMOVE] Lesa / Cyan Maeiouth[/b][/color]
- Backstory with Tieler.
[/li][li] [REMOVE] Rushera / Cyan Vayuth[/b][/color]
- No dragon or post-Hatching development in profile.
[/li][li] [KEEP] Tana / Cyan Oreath[/b][/color]
- Developed, fairly unattached but some rapport with other Tideturners should help a new player get going.
[/li][li] [REMOVE] Cassondra / Green Tegarth[/b][/color]
- People can make their own greenriders.
[/li][li] [MAYBE] G'wen / Green Niketh[/b]
- No dragon info or post-Hatching development in profile. Lan has some interest in him being picked up to be played with S'in/Nemeth?
[/li][li] [REMOVE] Kela / Green Loxith (Bronze firelizard)[/b][/color]
- People can make their own greenriders.
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[MAYBE] Larka / Green Oiloath- No dragon info or post-Hatching development in profile. - Azh (Previously put up for adoption by the player. - Cath) The player could be asked if she wants the character maintained on the adoption list.
[/li][li] [KEEP] M'grr / Green Taburith (ex-Renegade)[/b][/color]
- Ex-Renegade, developed profile.
[/li][li] [REMOVE] R'ev / Green Sugeth[/b][/color]
- People can make their own greenriders.
[/li][li] [REMOVE] Katheryne / Pink Frasketh[/b][/color]
- No dragon info or post-Hatching development in profile.
[/li][li] [REMOVE] Kjara / Pink Bailarth[/b][/color]
- People can make their own pinkriders.
[/li][li] [REMOVE] Malissa / Pink Phrixoth[/b][/color]
- Dramuuuuuuuuu. HUGE backstory element with dead character.
[/li][li] [REMOVE] Medusa / Pink Veryerdoth[/b][/color]
- Backstory involves rape and abuse, which if someone wants to play a character of that nature they would probably prefer one designed from the ground up. Mythology-based, extensive family tree.
[/li][li] [REMOVE] Pratyba / Pink Oorth[/b][/color]
- Famous, lots of IC backstory, would be hard to app and play correctly (i.e. true to the original character).
[/li][li] [REMOVE] Tyta / Pink Arratoth[/b][/color]
- People can make their own pinkriders. Already been adopted once and re-discarded once.
[/li][li] [REMOVE] Z'ra / Pink Iminoth[/b][/color]
- No dragon info or post-Hatching development in profile.
[/li][li] [REMOVE] A'ram / Black Helth[/b][/color]
- People can make their own blackriders.
[/li][li] [REMOVE] Dekistee / Black Daibunareth[/b][/color]
- People can make their own blackriders.
[/li][li] [REMOVE] Firane / Black Aeth[/b][/color]
- No dragon info or post-Hatching development.
[/li][li] [REMOVE] H'cup / Black Tuthleth (Orange firelizard)[/b][/color]
- Fandom-based character with an attachment to a character that just died in Threadfall.
[/li][li] [REMOVE] Naima / Black Thanath (Orange firelizard)[/b][/color]
- People can make their own blackriders.
[/li][li] [KEEP] Sarrasri / Black Tarvith[/b][/color]
- Placed recently for adoption at request of the player.
[/li][li] [REMOVE] Wiiy / Black Vantith[/b][/color]
- People can make their own blackriders.
[/li][li] [REMOVE] Xela / Black Almuth[/b][/color]
- People can make their own blackriders.
[/li][li] [REMOVE] Xara / Black Areith[/b][/color]
- No dragon info or post-Hatching development in profile.
[/li][li] [KEEP] A'mor / Gray Noyth (Master Dragonhealer, Orange firelizard)[/b][/color]
- Interesting character and dragon with a rare dragonrider/Mastery dual trait. Brother to Animatora.
[/li][li] [KEEP] N'az / Blue Repmath[/b][/color]
- Developed profile, recent Weyrling.
[/li][li] [REMOVE] R'lin / Blue Cobeath[/b][/color]
- No dragon info or post-Hatching info in profile.
[/li][li] [KEEP] Allele / Green Torvith[/b][/color]
- Developed profile, recent Weyrling.
[/li][li] [KEEP] Xiora / Pink Landorith[/b][/color]
- Recent Weyrling (first Tan clutch).
[/li][li] [REMOVE] All Dragonless Crafters (Talyen, Pherae, Aoife, Carfen)[/b][/color]
- Preexisting backstories, people can make their own Masters and Journeymen.[/li][/ul][/spoiler]
Edited Adoption List (14):- C'tan / Iron Majeth (Wingsecond)
- Calmera / Orange Minanth
- B'lor / Viridian Neth
- M'tren / Brown Esprith
- N'tiel / Brown Pionith
- Animatora / White Zuccheroth
- A'mor / Gray Noyth (Master Dragonhealer)
- B'nyur / Blue Oveth (Copper firelizard, Journeyman Dragonhealer)
- Tana / Cyan Oreath
- M'grr / Green Taburith (ex-Renegade)
- Sarrasri / Black Tarvith
- N'az / Blue Repmath (Weyrling)
- Allele / Green Torvith (Weyrling)
- Xiora / Pink Landorith (Weyrling)
Methods of RemovalTraditionally, if a character is not adopted, they are transferred or killed. Additionally, since most of these characters are now in special adoptable/NPC wings, they can simply be converted into NPCs. Weyrlings that have been slated for removal can be killed, or simply transferred after graduation.
Further Criteria for Adding or Removing AdoptablesAbandoned Weyrlings can be offered, but should be removed if no interest is shown in them by the time their class graduates. If a player would like a particular Weyrling to be kept on, they should contact the staff prior to that Weyrling's graduation and offer a reason why the Weyrling should be kept.
Riders of fighter-class dragons should generally not be offered as people can make their own fighters. Craftsmen should generally not be offered as people can make their own Craftsmen. Possible exceptions include riders/Craftsmen with queen, bronze, or m/f firelizards, or riders with Journeyman/Master statuses in a Craft. Cyanriders should also be considered as exceptions, but should not automatically be adoptable simply because they have a cyan. Original player requests to put a character up for adoption upon their departure should be honored regardless of the character's status. Other player requests for a character to be put up should be sent to the staff.
M/F, subqueen and kingriders should generally be offered for adoption. Subkings should be considered on a case-by-case basis (i.e. consider whether the rider or dragon has any distinguishing features to offer compared to the rest of the adoptables list).
Any character whose dragon did not Hatch at Dalibor should generally not be offered, regardless of their status. Exceptions can be made for transfer contest characters and so on.
Any character with rape or strong abuse elements in their history or IC backstory should generally not be offered, regardless of their status. Players whose characters have relationships with these would-be adoptables can make arguments for their adoptable retention to the staff, but if retained the profile should be appropriately marked.
After 1 OOC year of no interest after a character's initial listing (all characters would be considered re-listed after these tweaks), the staff should consider whether or not the character should be removed. If not, they can retain the character for an additional 1 OOC year. No character should be kept on the adoptables list for more than 2 OOC years.
Rewritten Adoptable BlurbsA notice should be added indicating that characters will be transferred to PC wings upon adoption. Ranking characters (Wingseconds etc) will lose that rank upon transfer and will have to reapply for it in their new wing. The player can make up any explanation they like for the wing transfer and loss of rank.
Wing title is now only included if the character is already in a PC wing (ex. queens' wing).
Examples:
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New Adoptable Profile PresentationCurrently, potential players of adoptables must wade through the adoptable's entire profile, as well as running searches for IC backstory elements. In some cases the profile may not be updated. Additionally, previous corrections of adoptables have forced potential players to try to come up with a new interpretation of the character while still adhering to the definitions of the original profile, resulting in profile regurgitations rather than expansions.
A new profile presentation (created by editing the existing profile and archiving the original under a spoiler notice) would give players the information they need to adopt the character, while giving them the freedom to make that character their own. Additionally, any IC backstory elements or character relationships that need mentioning are presented from the outset rather than in corrections after an application has been submitted.
Example: Basically, anyway. The history could be reduced even further, like just a timeline or list or something.
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[ADOPTABLE PROFILE]
[A'MOR, RIDER OF GRAY NOYTH]
Name: A'mor (Arenamor)
Age: 37 (Summer 164)
Sex: Male
Origin: Benden Hold
Rank: Wingrider, Master Dragonhealer
Wing: Lower Flight / Horizon Wing
Family: A'nim (father), Alinatamora (mother), Animatora (sister), Lialty (foster mother), Pilat (foster father)
Pets:-Firelizards: Orange Lady, Blue Fellis, Green Bubbly
Personality: Witty, impatient, distrustful. Likes to talk circles around people for his own amusement. Likes to play at being friends with everyone. Can only tolerate children for short periods of time. Doesn't like most people, but he doesn't treat them differently for his dislike's sake. Not terribly sympathetic in most cases, but he is attuned to his dragon's mood and she wants to help, he will too. Prone to three-second tantrums over small annoyances. Fidgety, can't stand to lie dormant or literally lie still. Loyal to and protective of his sister.
Appearance: Slim, wiry muscles, average height, sharp features. Blond hair, blue eyes, all about presentation- he wants everyone's eyes on him from the moment he enters the room.
History: Own parents quite laissez-faire about raising him. Meets a fisherman's boy named Lip later in his childhood, and generally falls in with Lip's large family at that point. Learns how to boat, fish and hunt with Lip. His biological parents demand that he Apprentice at the Healer Hall till he is old enough to Impress; A'mor rebels, tries to run away, but is caught by his father (an ironrider) and sent to the Hall. Poor learner, but eventually finds some ground to stand on in the field of dragonhealing.
Kidnapped again by his father when a Hatching is about to start and dropped on the Sands. Impresses Noyth. Transfers away from Benden (and his father) to Southern Weyr two Turns after graduation. Continues to study dragonhealing. Noyth consistently flown by Purple Altith, ridden by F'del, with whom A'mor becomes fast friends. Noyth lays Pink Alyenth at Southern. F'del gives A'mor all his flits, one-by-one, as eggs after each of Noyth's Flights.
Discovers he has a sister (Animatora) when he is 23. He takes her from his parents and raises her with F'del's help. They all transfer to Dalibor after A'mor attains the rank of Master Dragonhealer.
Dragon Name: Noyth
Dragon Color: Gray
Dragon Age: 25 (Winter 177)
Dragon Sex: Female
Dragon Origin: Benden Weyr
Dragon Personality: Quiet, empathic, moody. Only tends to speak up on matters concerning A'mor. Dislikes being apart from A'mor, especially not being able to see him, but doesn't complain openly about it. Similarly dislikes A'mor's many false friends. Chats only with witty dragons that can keep up with her, hates talking with humans, and especially dislikes children (A'mor is enough of a child for her). However, she is still highly sensitive to any emotions human or dragon, and is an excellent Searchdragon. Highly moody, emotionally driven by internal dialogues that have little to do with what is happening in the real world. Doesn't like being ordered around. Highly protective clutcher.
Dragon Length: 12'6"
Dragon Appearance: Powerful, firm physique. Skin like uncut marble, cold and dull. Exceptionally large wings.
Dragon Hex: a0a0a0
IC Backstory:-Major IC events: dragon war, maneating fish/arrival of pillies, assassin attack, kitchen fire
-Autumn 194:
Animatora Impresses White Zuccheroth.-Spring 197:
Noyth lays Black Ayarth (Blue Ripariath - father).-Spring 199:
Noyth lays White Jarith (Blue Ripariath - father).-Autumn 200:
F'del (Purple Altith) dies in the kitchen fire.IC Relationships:-Animatora, rider of White Zuccheroth (sister) [[PLAYED BY: n/a (ADO)]]
(If a player has a character they want to have a friendship/love/enemy etc status with him, they would report it to the staff and it would be listed here along with any relevant posts.)
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Original Profile:NOTICE: You do not need to read this profile to adopt the character, and you do not have to mention or exactly follow specific historical events, personality or appearance traits that are not mentioned in the adoptable profile.
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Original profile goes here.
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Further NotesCath volunteers to keep ages on the blurbs updated. Azh will do most of the mini-profiles and Cath will check them. Cath wanted me to PM this like secret service but I'M NOT GONNA DO THAT DEAL WITH IT CATH no editing me because I am free like the wind.